Romance: Auctioned To The Panther: BBW Dragon Shifter Romance Standalone by Ashley HunterMy rating: 2 of 5 stars
The concept was great , the delivery was awful! You see there was these strange punctuation, for example.
But then, he knew that Grace didn't fully trust him even then- and she had reason to: Christian still had't been able to tell her...... ok why did you use a colon instead of a comma or something but a colon is used before you give a list of things: apples, oranges, etc.
She does this twice on the same page. Then she talks about Grace "bringing herself off" Did you mean getting herself off?
It bugged the crap out of me and I am sorry I did finish it but only b/c now it was like a " spot the mistake" game for me.
PLEASE re edit , re work it , and it could be a hell of a story.
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